Before I show you my story I wanted to say the photos you see we built into freeze frames. From this we created a vocab list and then only had 15 minutes to write a paragraph. Our work is from the book The Treasure Box.
As I walk in pain I look around.people shivering in fear, a baby that looks thirsty.I see smoke.I am terrifed and wondering where we are going to stay.I see people with injuries.people bleading .I am frezzing and feel hate for the the people who bombed our house’s.I am hoping that we can find somewhere safe.
